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With my every breath,
With all I have left,
From the deepest depths,
Of my heart,
I love you.

With all of my strength,
With ten miles' length,
Every thought I think,
is of how much
I love you.


For the length of forever,
As long as we're together,
Through good and bad weather,
For always,
I love you.

Until the very end of days,
Until my breath fades away,
Until death separates our ways,
Until then,
I love you.

When no one is there,
When you think no one cares,
When love seems too rare,
Remember,
I love you.

When everything's gone,
When all has withdrawn,
When hopelessness dawns,
Don't forget,
I love you.

When you fall down,
When your dreams come unwound,
When hope can't be found,
Be happy,
I love you.

When you make mistakes,
When you're filled with hate,
When you're old and gray,
Even then,
I'll love you,
I always will
the title is crappy. but im tired ><
I :heart: you


hey hey, it aint emo for once <3 :P ahha
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:iconhahihula:
Hahihula Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2006
Do you know what? I love it. This is a beatiful poem.
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HerTemporaryLife Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2006
i love this!
repetition was awesome
i can relate
<3
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:iconkillyoutomorrow:
KillYouTomorrow Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2006
thanks <3
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:iconxcasualties2:
xcasualties2 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2006
That is the best poem i've ever read.
Honest.
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:iconkillyoutomorrow:
KillYouTomorrow Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2006
aw thanks :]
:hug:
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:iconthe-woods:
the-woods Featured By Owner May 26, 2006
oh my fucking god.
that's it.
im coming to canada.
and im marrying you.
:heart: x the end of the universe
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:iconkillyoutomorrow:
KillYouTomorrow Featured By Owner May 26, 2006
lol
sounds like a plan!
*kisses his fiance*
:heart:
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:iconthe-woods:
the-woods Featured By Owner May 26, 2006
hahaha
*books plane tickets*
hehe
:heart:
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:iconkillyoutomorrow:
KillYouTomorrow Featured By Owner May 26, 2006
lmfao :P :heart:
*waits for your plane to arrive, holding up a sign that says "Carter loves Cassie more than anything"
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:iconthe-woods:
the-woods Featured By Owner May 26, 2006
hahaha aw that's so cute.
*runs over to carter hugs him tight*
*kisses him on the cheek*
:heart:
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:iconkillyoutomorrow:
KillYouTomorrow Featured By Owner May 28, 2006
*kisses cassie*
:heart: i missed you, fiance <3
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:iconthe-woods:
the-woods Featured By Owner May 29, 2006
naaw.
:heart:
gosh i love you.
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:iconkillyoutomorrow:
KillYouTomorrow Featured By Owner May 29, 2006
:heart: i love you too
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Burni-Diru-Noh Featured By Owner May 25, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
aww sweet! You used the repetition real well.
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:iconkillyoutomorrow:
KillYouTomorrow Featured By Owner May 26, 2006
thank you <3 :hug:
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MysteryMan91 Featured By Owner May 24, 2006   Traditional Artist
very nice.
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:iconfireproofmarshmallow:
;_____; schweeet

:heart:
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:iconkillyoutomorrow:
KillYouTomorrow Featured By Owner May 24, 2006
thank you :heart:
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:iconrwaar:
Rwaar Featured By Owner May 24, 2006
That's real good.
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:iconkillyoutomorrow:
KillYouTomorrow Featured By Owner May 24, 2006
thanks muchly
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permafrosteyes Featured By Owner May 24, 2006   Photographer
That's cute... =] It's sweet and darling. xP
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:iconkillyoutomorrow:
KillYouTomorrow Featured By Owner May 24, 2006
lol yeah. for once it is! :P
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permafrosteyes Featured By Owner May 25, 2006   Photographer
;P
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:iconkillyoutomorrow:
KillYouTomorrow Featured By Owner May 26, 2006
:cuddle:
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:iconpermafrosteyes:
permafrosteyes Featured By Owner May 26, 2006   Photographer
:hug:
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GetOutCompanyInc Featured By Owner May 24, 2006
beauitful, i like this poem alot:)
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:iconkillyoutomorrow:
KillYouTomorrow Featured By Owner May 24, 2006
thank you tiffany <3
:hug:
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GetOutCompanyInc Featured By Owner May 24, 2006
he he calling me tiffany no probl:)
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Firestar7218 Featured By Owner May 23, 2006
Awww, so sweet =P And it's not emo! Congratz! lol :highfive:
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:iconkillyoutomorrow:
KillYouTomorrow Featured By Owner May 23, 2006
yeah! <3
thought id do different stuff
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:iconfirestar7218:
Firestar7218 Featured By Owner May 23, 2006
^^ Good idea
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